The line graph gives information about the usage of Facebook and Twitter in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows that in 2012, Twitter use was more than Facebook

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time hours of consuming fall reached 2014 the lowest of around 10 minutes which started to rise to 35 minutes in 2016.

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, Facebook steadily increased during the period of 2012-2016 , achieving a plateau around 2014-2015.

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