The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the share of working
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
aged 60-64 in four different countries in 1970 and 2000. Fix the agreement mistake
females
Overall
, Linking Words
man
figure Correct your spelling
the male
had
experienced a decline Unnecessary verb
apply
while
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Correct article usage
the women
women
Change noun form
women's
number
Use synonyms
had
relatively stable throughout the period.
The proportion of employed men aged 60-64 in 2000 was lower Verb problem
was
comparing
to the Change the form of the verb
compared
number
in 1970. Belgium and Australia Use synonyms
had
experienced a significant downturn, from 79% to 19% and 74% to 47% respectively. The USA had Unnecessary verb
apply
also
seen a decline in proportion, but not as much as the Linking Words
formers
, from 73% to 55%. Japan had Fix the agreement mistake
former
also
decreased but it was the least among Linking Words
other
, with Fix the agreement mistake
others
the
figure of 84% to 76%.
The percentage of working women aged 60-64 had seen a Correct article usage
a
slight
different trend from the men's Change the adjective
slightly
number
. The USA and Australia became the countries that experienced an increase in proportion, from 36% to 38% and 18% to 19% respectively. Use synonyms
Conversely
, both Japan and Belgium numbers had reduced in Linking Words
number
, 43% to 40% and 8% to 7% each.Use synonyms
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