The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides key information about the differences between people who travelled
for
serval countries including Africa, the US, Asia and the Change preposition
to
pacific
, Europe and Capitalize word
Pacific
Middle
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the Middle
east
. across 15 years starting from 1990. The Capitalize word
East
unit
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units
uses
in measurement are Wrong verb form
used
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million
.
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millions
Overall
, it’s clear Linking Words
form
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from
graph
that, the distribution Correct article usage
the graph
the
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of the
amount
of travellers was the highest in 2005 rather than the other years, the total Change the quantifier
number
visitors
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number of visitors
account
for 693.7 Wrong verb form
accounted
million
. Use synonyms
Conversely
in 1990 was the least which were represent 448.9 Linking Words
million
.
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According to
states that people have travelled to it, Linking Words
Obviously
the number of tourists was increasing gradually across the interval in all nations.
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Obviously,
With out
doubt, Europe had popularity across the years, which faced 280.2 Correct your spelling
Without
million
visitors in 1990, Use synonyms
following
by Wrong verb form
followed
steady
rise in guests at Correct article usage
a steady
whole
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the whole
interval
. Fix the agreement mistake
intervals
Secondly
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were
Asia and the Pacific, which Correct subject-verb agreement
was
accepted
in 1990 ,Add a missing verb
was accepted
60
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with 60
million
visitors Use synonyms
jumped
in 2005 to make up nearly 140. Verb problem
apply
While
the other cities Linking Words
was
at the bottom.Change the verb form
were
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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