The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides key information about the differences between people who travelled
for
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serval countries including Africa, the US, Asia and the
pacific
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Pacific
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, Europe and
Middle
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the Middle
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east
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. across 15 years starting from 1990. The
unit
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units
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uses
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in measurement are
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million
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millions
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.
Overall
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, it’s clear
form
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from
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graph
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the graph
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that, the distribution
the
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amount
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number
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of travellers was the highest in 2005 rather than the other years, the total
visitors
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number of visitors
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account
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accounted
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for 693.7
million
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.
Conversely
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in 1990 was the least which were represent 448.9
million
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.
According to
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states that people have travelled to it,
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the number of tourists was increasing gradually across the interval in all nations.
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doubt, Europe had popularity across the years, which faced 280.2
million
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visitors in 1990,
following
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followed
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by
steady
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a steady
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rise in guests at
whole
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the whole
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interval
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intervals
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.
Secondly
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were
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was
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Asia and the Pacific, which
accepted
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was accepted
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in 1990 ,
60
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million
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visitors
jumped
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apply
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in 2005 to make up nearly 140.
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the other cities
was
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were
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at the bottom.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Contractions: Don't use contractions.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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