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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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The first bar chart illustrates the destination of UK
graduates
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(excluding full-time
work
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) in 2008. It was the
number
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 of
graduates
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 choosing
further
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 study that stood out as far more students(29,665) made the choices than others. The
number
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 of
graduates
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 who
selected
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were selected
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 to take part-time
work
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 was similar to that put out of
work
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, at 17,735 and 16,235 respectively. Only 3,500 students participated in voluntary
work
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, which was the smallest. The second bar chart compares the four types of choices among
postgraduates
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. Similar to the first bar chart, the largest
number
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 of
postgraduates
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 opted for
further
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 study, but the
number
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 was approximately one in ten of the counterparts. 2535 students chose to take part-time
work
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, about 200 lower than
further
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 study. Only 345
postgraduates
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 engaged in voluntary
work
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the
number
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 of
graduates
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 in the four types of destination was about 10 times as many as
postgraduates
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, except for part-time
work
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, work, number, postgraduates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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