The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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factors among students of diverse

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groups and the amount of support they receive from their supervisors. The units are measured in

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, it is clear from the graph that group ages that are under

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40

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, indicate that significant

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of them

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for their career rather than their own interest.

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, the majority of employers encourage their employees who are under 29

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the data shown, individuals who are less than 26

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,

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the highest number in studying for their career with a significant 80,

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the lowest fraction of them have the ability to

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for their own interest. The

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groups of 26 - 29 and the 30 - 39 categories,

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experience higher

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in studying for their profession compared to the low figures in the other factor, which were less than 30.

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, the 40 to 49

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represent

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an equivalent number

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in both

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causes. Over 49, shows that a major

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numbers

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of

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because of their own enjoyment with a substantial 70,

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only a small amount of them

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for their employment In terms of employers' support, it was obvious that they give their utmost encouragement to their workers who are situated in both categories that are under the

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of 29, which represent 62 and 50 respectively.

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the category that consists of workers from 30-39

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the lowest amount of support with 32 approximately. Individuals in the

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of 40 to 49 genre

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a modest 39. But people who passed the

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of 49

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were slightly over 40.