The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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the
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in four different genres (Fix the agreement mistake
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drama
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comedy
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fantasy
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romance
) in 1996 and 2006. Use synonyms
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drama
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consistenly
became the highest in the Correct your spelling
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number
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film
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while
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comedy
was the Use synonyms
most
highest in bringing revenues.
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drama
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film
became the most produced Use synonyms
film
with a Use synonyms
number
of around 26%, Use synonyms
while
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comedy
had 20% shares. Two Use synonyms
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other genres
genre
sat on the third and fourth, with Use synonyms
fantasy
at around 12% and Use synonyms
romance
at approximately 7%. The numbers were growing in 2006 for the three of the genres, except Use synonyms
romance
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Drama
underwent a significant increase to 35%, Use synonyms
comedy
at 25%, and Use synonyms
fantasy
at Use synonyms
slighlty
above 15%. Correct your spelling
slightly
Romance
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genre
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film
had not experienced a change, with a share still about 7%.
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romance
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the romance
genre
became the only Use synonyms
genre
that Use synonyms
experience
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Comedy
became the highest with the Use synonyms
number
of 20% in 1996, and around 25% Use synonyms
at
2006, Change preposition
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while
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drama
became the second with the Use synonyms
number
of around 16% at first and Use synonyms
then
had a slight increase to around 17%. Linking Words
Fantasy
had experienced a high increase from around 3% to around 8% in the given time, Use synonyms
while
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romance
dropped from 5% to around 2%.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words drama, comedy, fantasy, romance, number, film, genre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 8 times.
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