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The pie charts below show the age groups of the users on different social media platforms in Australia in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The pie charts below show the age groups of the users on different social media platforms in Australia in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the
age
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 distribution of
users
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 across
three
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 social media
platforms
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, namely Facebook, YouTube and Twitter, in Australia in 2011.
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, there were notable similarities in the
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 distribution patterns across these social networks, with people aged between 18 and 49 making up the majority of
users
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 on all
three
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platforms
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 and elderly individuals aged 65 and above consistently representing the smallest user group. Regarding the dominant
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 groups, individuals aged 18 to 34 accounted for similar proportions on all
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platforms
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, at approximately 29-30%. Meanwhile, the 35-49
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 bracket showed more variation, with Twitter having the highest percentage at 40%, followed by Facebook at 28%,
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 YouTube recorded the lowest figure of 26%. As for the remaining
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 groups, teenage
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 aged 10 to 17 made up approximately one-fifth of
users
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 across all
three
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platforms
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. The proportion of
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 aged between 50 and 64 was relatively consistent across all
platforms
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, ranging from 9% to 15%.
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, the elderly demographic above 65 years old had
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a minimal
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 presence on these
platforms
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, with figures varying between 4% and 10%.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, users, three, platforms with synonyms.
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