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The chart shows the usage of yellow taxis and 2 ride-sharing services in New York city from 2015 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.

The chart shows the usage of yellow taxis and 2 ride-sharing services in New York city from 2015 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the trend in
usage
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 rates for Yellow
Taxi
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,
Uber
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, and
Lyft
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 in New York City over a four-year period between 2015 and 2018. As you can see, Yellow
taxi
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usage
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 has been declining over the given period, showing a consistent downward trend.
Conversely
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,
usage
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 of ride-sharing services, specifically
Uber
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 and
Lyft
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, has increased from 2015 to 2018.
According to
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 the current chart, there are three different types of taxis that people use; Yellow
Taxi
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,
Uber
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, and
Lyft
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. In 2015, Yellow taxis had a higher
usage
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 rate than ride-share services, but by 2018, both
Uber
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 and
Lyft
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 had exceeded Yellow
taxi
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usage
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.
Uber
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 started with a substantial amount of
usage
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 and experienced consistent growth throughout the period.
In addition
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 to the data given,
Lyft
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 started with a smaller user base but showed dramatic growth, especially from 2016 onwards, narrowing the gap with
Uber
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 towards the end of 2018.
This
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 means the trends suggest a shifting consumer preference towards ride-sharing services over traditional taxis.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usage, taxi, uber, lyft with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • trend
  • usage rates
  • period
  • decline
  • consistent downward trend
  • conversely
  • ride-sharing services
  • substantial
  • user base
  • growth
  • narrow the gap
  • usage rate
  • consumer preference
  • traditional taxis
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