The chart below shows the value of one country's exports various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of eports in compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of eports in compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
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The charts present the value of one country's exports in various categories and how the proportion changes between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
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, Petroleum is the highest product category,
while
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textile is the lowest. But, The percentage of textiles is incredibly high and except the Gems and Jewelry, the percentage of the other categories is increasing.
Furthermore
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, between 2015 and 2016, Petroleum products and Engineered goods were given high earned values. In 2015, it was given at above 60$ and Below 60$, respectively.
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, in 2016 it got more than before at more than 60% each. Following jewellery and Gems are slightly decreased from above 40$ to just around 40$.
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, Agricultural products are the same throughout the period at around 30%. And the
last
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is textile products rose from below 30% to above 30%.
However
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, despite the earnings, the categories are increasing, except the jewellery.
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