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The diagram shows the parts of a dock for an mp3 player. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the parts of a dock for an mp3 player. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the components of a dock for an mp3 player.
ovearll
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Overall
 we can see that the mp player. consist of many parts that
helps
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 it function.
firstly
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their
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 is a. red button on the
tope
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top
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. left of the dock,
this
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 button. is used as.
a
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infra red
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infrared
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.
on
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 the top
righttheir
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right
 is a blue
buttonwhich
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button which
 is used to control the volume,just over thattheirisanotherbutton to turn the mp3 player on or off.
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moreover
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,
onboth
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on both
 sides of the deck there are speakers
toenjoy
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to enjoy
 the
sounds
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 and you can always control the sound with the green button mentioned earlier.just under the speaker on the left there is a
poer
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power
 cable.on the middle of the screen
their
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 is a. clock to check the time.
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