Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with trade, health and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

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, health, and education. Some argue that helping poor
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to stability and
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others believe that puts heavy pressure on
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of the giving
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. In my view,
while
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rich
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help poor
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have drawbacks in terms of heavy load on the budget, the advantages of
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money
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to underdeveloped
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,
such
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as
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stability and
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migration
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,
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outweigh these drawbacks. In my opinion, the
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that have a
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economic
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should help poor
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.
First,
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providing
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to them,
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will result in balance, which in turn
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criminal
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rate
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, which is beneficial for the
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growth.
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,
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have
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enough support from richer
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as Saudi Arabia will show
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criminal episodes.
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, the migration
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in result will be less.
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, some argue that giving
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to poor
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be
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of poor
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countries
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governments and
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the load on the
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of richer
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. They believe that it is one of the major
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of
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in poor
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to ensure the flow of cash, by providing jobs, and the wise use
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country
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sources
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sufficiency. In conclusion,
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it is true that
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giving
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to poor
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can foster responsibility, I believe the advantages of helping poor
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,
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as
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in both criminal
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rate
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,
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and migration,
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these
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