The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides key information about evaluation results of the reasons behind individuals moving from capital cities to a particular country between 2000 to 2015. The units are measured in numbers.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that moving to study was the highest purpose for people to move
whereas
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, adventure carried the lowest interest for people to move. Focusing on family/friends and adventure as the reasons to move. These purposes around 1000 and nearly 11000 of survey results, respectively in 2000. By 2005 their figures were identical at 1000, after which moving for family/friends increased considerably as an adventure for moving stabilised throughout the period at 1000. Meanwhile, moving purpose for family/friends levelled out around 20000 and remained the same until 2015. As for employment and study reasons, the former results rose from 60000 to about 9000 between 2005 and 2010
then
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dramatically dropped to nearly 80000 in 2015.
While
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the latter began around 25000 before significantly grew into nearly at 90000.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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