The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the percentages of men and women in full-time and part-time employment in the UK in 1988 and 2012.
Overall
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, most people chose full-time
jobs
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rather than part-time
jobs
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. There were differences in the numbers of employees in the UK,
although
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the rate decreased for some categories,
but
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the
number
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of employees increased.
First,
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the
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of men in full-time employment was the largest in both years. The ratio fell from 53% to 47% in 2012, but the
number
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of employees rose from 12,539 in 1988 to 13,794 in 2012.
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to the male workforce, the
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and percentage of women working
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increased, from 4,482 (19%) to 7,969 (26%) in 2012.
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, there was a slight increase from 1,550 (6%) people in 1988 to 2,131 (7%) in 2012 for men who worked part-time
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.
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, there was a slight decrease in the percentage, but an increase in the
number
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of women working in part-time
jobs
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, from 22% (5,268) in 1988 to 20% (5,979) in 2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words jobs, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • economic landscape
  • information technology
  • service industry
  • manufacturing
  • agriculture
  • sector shift
  • healthcare sector
  • public administration
  • education sector
  • advancements in technology
  • traditional industries
  • modern sectors
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