The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the percentages of men and women in full-time and part-time employment in the UK in 1988 and 2012.
Overall
, most people chose full-time Linking Words
jobs
rather than part-time Use synonyms
jobs
. There were differences in the numbers of employees in the UK, Use synonyms
although
the rate decreased for some categories, Linking Words
but
the Remove the conjunction
apply
number
of employees increased.
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First,
the Linking Words
number
of men in full-time employment was the largest in both years. The ratio fell from 53% to 47% in 2012, but the Use synonyms
number
of employees rose from 12,539 in 1988 to 13,794 in 2012. Use synonyms
In contrast
to the male workforce, the Linking Words
number
and percentage of women working Use synonyms
full time
increased, from 4,482 (19%) to 7,969 (26%) in 2012.
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full-time
Moreover
, there was a slight increase from 1,550 (6%) people in 1988 to 2,131 (7%) in 2012 for men who worked part-time Linking Words
jobs
. Use synonyms
However
, there was a slight decrease in the percentage, but an increase in the Linking Words
number
of women working in part-time Use synonyms
jobs
, from 22% (5,268) in 1988 to 20% (5,979) in 2012.Use synonyms
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