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The table shows the number os full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2000/2021 and 2021/2022. Summarize the main features and make conparisons where relavant.

The table shows the number os full-time students from India who studied at various universities in the UK in 2000/2021 and 2021/2022. Summarize the main features and make conparisons where relavant.
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The table illustrates the
number
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 of full-time Indian
students
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 who studied at several universities in the UK in 2000/2021 and 2021/2022.
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, Coventry
University
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 had the highest
number
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 of
students
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 in the years 2021/2022
while
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 Sheffield
University
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 had the highest
increase
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 in
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percentage
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the percentage
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 of the
number
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 of
students
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. BPP
University
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 had the
second highest
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number
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 of
students
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 in 2021/22 sessions and the lowest
increase
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 in
percentage
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 in the
number
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 of
students
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. The
University
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 of Leicester had the third-lowest
number
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 of
students
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. In 2021/22
Coverntry
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Coventry
University
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 had 5290
students
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,
and
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it
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which
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 was the highest
number
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 of Indian
students
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 among other universities, and the
number
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 of
students
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 increased
of
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 121.3%. Meanwhile, in 2021/2022, the
percentage
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 of
students
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increase
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 was 187% in Sheffield
University
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, which was the highest among other universities. BPP
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university
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 had the second-highest
number
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 of
students
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 in
2021
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the 2021
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/2022 session
,
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while
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 having the lowest
increase
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 in
percentage
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 with 46.8
in
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apply
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student
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number
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numbers
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. The
University
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 of Leicester had
the
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an
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increase
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 in
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percentage
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the percentage
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 of 103.4 in student
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number
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numbers
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 and had the third lowest
number
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 of
students
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 which was the third
highests
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highest
,
while
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Angila
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Anglia
 Ruskin
University
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 had a 69% of
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increase
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the increase
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 in student
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number
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numbers
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, university, increase, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 7 times.
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