The bart chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The bar graph presents information about the percentage of weekly income of families in one specific country in 1968 and

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2018.

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weekly spending on food by households

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significantly

decrease

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whereas

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housing and leisure time

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grew compared to 1968 respectively.

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, spending money on household goods

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steady in each period given.

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, the proportion of food was 35% in 1968 but

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dramatically declined to approximately 17% in 2018.

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, housing was 10 % after that a sharp

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to 17%

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leisure time remarkably grew to 23% over a period of 50 years.

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, Household goods remained steady at the same level by approximately 7%.

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, the remaining categories of spending like fuel and power, clothing and footwear and personal was 6%,10% and 8% in 1968,

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fell

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to around 5% respectively .

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, expenditures

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transport doubled from 1968 to 2018.