The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two figures illustrate different perspectives pne we look at the line chart we can see the amount of money that was spent for the
last
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forty
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on the other hand
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, the pie chart provides information about the
reasons
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starting from 1980 up until 2010 which is the same period as the line graph. Looking at the line graph it shows that the British economy reached its highest between 1995 and 2000 when it hit almost 12 million pounds, after that it started to drop gradually where it was slightly below 10.5 million which is not considered as bad as it was back in 1980 where it reached its lowest point. Surely there are many
reasons
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why these numbers and incomes from international tourists differ. Even though 1980 and the 5 upcoming
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were considered the worst compared to the upcoming quinquennial ,
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, the number of overseas sightseers reached almost half per cent of the visiting information
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, it dropped dramatically and exactly 6 per cent in 2010. when it comes to other
reasons
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for both
years
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business comes in second place and, when it comes to the third even though it's similar for both
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(visiting friends and family) it increased rapidly in 2010 causing other
reasons
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to decrease with a high difference in comparison with 1980.
overall
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,the bar graph illustrates that the income from international tourists has significantly changed in a positive way
comparing it
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to 1980 and we can tell the reason from the pie chart which was mostly caused by immigration.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years, reasons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • steady increase
  • fluctuations
  • overseas visitors
  • significant rise
  • primary reasons
  • pie charts
  • holiday visits
  • business trips
  • visits to friends and relatives
  • expenditure
  • travel options
  • economic factors
  • tourism marketing strategies
  • global travel priorities
  • proportions
  • changing
  • correlate
  • reflect
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