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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff?

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Every company in the business industry can be identified based on the
uniform
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 of their employee. The power that the
uniform
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 holds are representation of who you are as a whole. There are a lot of advantages
in
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 wearing a company
uniform
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, most of the time it serves as
model
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 to
be easily identify
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 if a person is part of the company or not. In places like
retails
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retail
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 shops, you will be surprised that they don't impose
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uniform
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uniforms
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 and shoppers tend to mistakenly
approched
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approach
a
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the
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 wrong person to ask for a product or to clarify a question. It
also
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 promotes
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the heirarchy
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heirarchy
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hierarchy
 of
organization
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the organization
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 and a simple marketing strategy that brings uniqueness to stand out
to
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 competitors.
Additonally
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, designs and style can be a reason why uniforms are necessary.
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, a
Nurse
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uniform
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 comes with a lot of pockets because they can keep small tools to be used
while
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 on duty. An Engineer wears a hard hat for safety and
reflector
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a reflector
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 vest so they can be seen from below.
To sum up
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,
this
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 proves that wearing
a uniforms
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uniforms
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are
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is
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 beneficial not only to the institution it serves but
as
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to
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a
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the
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 whole population.
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Clarify and expand upon points made in the essay. Provide more detailed examples and explanations to fully achieve the task.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical connection between sentences and ideas to enhance the overall flow and comprehension.
introduction conclusion present
The essay effectively introduces the topic with a clear statement on the importance of uniforms in companies.
relevant specific examples
Good examples such as nurse uniforms and engineer clothing are used to illustrate practical advantages of having uniforms.
introduction conclusion present
Concludes with a summary that effectively ties together the main points discussed in the essay.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Corporate Identity
  • Brand Recognition
  • Professional Image
  • Team Cohesion
  • Equality
  • Inclusive Workplace
  • Customer Identification
  • Enhanced Customer Service
  • High-Visibility
  • Protective Clothing
  • Cost Efficiency
  • Business Attire
  • Professionalism
  • Workplace Discipline
  • Productivity
  • Standard of Appearance
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