The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps compare the current layout of the Islip
town
Use synonyms
centre
and the proposed rearrangement for its future improvement.
At present, there is a main road crossing the Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
centre
from west to east, with a number of shops along both sides. Meanwhile, the countryside is located to the north of Use synonyms
this
street, Linking Words
while
two housing areas are sited to the south of it. Linking Words
Moreover
, two secondary roads connecting to the main artery lead to a school and a Linking Words
park
, respectively.
In the planned development, the main road will only serve pedestrians. To the north of it, there is a new bus station, a shopping Use synonyms
centre
, a car Use synonyms
park
and a housing area. Use synonyms
In contrast
, to the south of it, the shops will remain, but a new housing unit is going to be added. Linking Words
Moreover
, a new dual carriageway surrounding the Linking Words
town
Use synonyms
centre
is projected to be built. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
park
and the school are expected to remain at the same places, but the sizes of them will be changed. The size of the school is planned to be enlarged, Use synonyms
while
that of the Linking Words
park
will be reduced.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Islip Linking Words
town
Use synonyms
centre
will be improved greatly with more houses, entertainment and transport facilities.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, centre, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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