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The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map provides a planned area for a new
school
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 in the town of Canterbury, with
two
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 possible sites.
First,
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there are
two
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 options to build a new
school
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 in the town
center
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centre
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 with no traffic zone and in the countryside for another preference.
In addition
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, the
two
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 options have the same distance
with
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as
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 the university in the North of the map, which can help students to continue their study to the next level. The first
option
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 is S2, located in the
center
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 of the map and surrounded by housing and countryside areas.
Moreover
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, there are
two
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 towns connected by
road
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a road
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 called Chartham with
4500
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 population and approximately 7 km and Sturry with
7000
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a 7000
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 population and 5 km approximately, which will have a fair distance between the
two
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 areas. Meanwhile, S1 was the
worse
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worst
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option
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 to create a new
school
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 which is only nearby from the Sturry area and located at Northwest
that
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which
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 makes it not easily accessible by other people on the other side, which has less benefit for
this
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option
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. In conclusion, S2 is the best
option
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 and provides several reasons for constructing a new
school
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 to meet the needs of the surrounding community, as its strategic location and supported by the crowd of population,
to
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apply
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create an ideal environment and establish
profitable
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a profitable
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 market.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, two, option with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • accessibility
  • proximity
  • town centre
  • site
  • amenities
  • proposed development
  • population distribution
  • environmental impact
  • traffic congestion
  • community needs
  • educational facilities
  • public transport
  • recreational areas
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