The diagrams below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates how an essential
oil
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is produced in
a
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the
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perfume industry.
Overall
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, there are four compartments with four steps in the procedures.
Firstly
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, the
water
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is boiled to create
water
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vapour in the first compartment,
then
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the steam
run
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through the tube to the second container with aromatic plants.
Secondly
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, The heat extracts the
oil
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vapour from the plants, which goes to the condenser that
filled
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with cold
water
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. The
water
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absorbs the heat from the substance in the tube, which the
water
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go
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out to a tube on top
as
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of
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hot
water
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.
Consequently
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, the essential
oil
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that
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apply
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cools down with
water
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and
go
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goes
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to the
last
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compartment, the
seperator
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separator
. The essential
oil
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turns into
droplet
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a droplet
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at the top part,
while
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the remaining aromatic
water
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, called hydrolat, stays at the bottom part.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • essential oils
  • extraction
  • distillation
  • cold pressing
  • fragrance profile
  • maturation process
  • stabilizing the fragrance
  • filtration process
  • purifying
  • bottling
  • containment
  • aromatic properties
  • carrier for the fragrance oil
  • evaporation
  • dispersion of the scent
  • diluting
  • consistent and long-lasting scent
  • impurities
  • premium fragrances
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