Two weeks ago you bought a radio from a local branch of a well-known chain of shops. It did not work properly. The shop took it back and said they would repair it. You have waited a week and it is still not ready. Write a letter to the shop. In your letter say what has happened and how you feel ask them to explain why there has been a delay ask them to repair the radio very quickly or to supply you with a new radio

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding a

radio

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had bought from your renowned shop two weeks ago. Since it was not functioning well, I

had

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returned to the shop and they would amend my broken

radio

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. I have waited for a week and the

radio

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was not ready.

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, I am

dissapointed

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disappointed

to have a brand new

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broken in a couple of weeks after the purchase.

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is because

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kept hearing static noises

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the

radio

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played

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from time to time.

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had tried to troubleshoot it, but to no avail.

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would kindly request an explanation of why there has been a delay

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the amendment of my

radio

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have waited for quite a long period but ended up with no results. As long as there is a valid reason for the delay,

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event will be overlooked.

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, my patience has been running low and I would like to have the

radio

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repair

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as soon as possible.

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,

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would like to request you to provide another new

radio

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compensation

of

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for

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the

delay

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delayed

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repairment

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. Sincerely, Kim