The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. The Brick Manufacturing Process
The diagram above
represent
the process used for Change the verb form
represents
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bricks
manufacturing in Fix the agreement mistake
brick
building
industry.
Add an article
the building
Overall
, the process Linking Words
begin
with clays Change the verb form
begins
digged
with excavators. Correct your spelling
dug
Then
, the main purpose of it is Linking Words
the
Change preposition
for the
bricks
Use synonyms
being
out Change the verb form
to be
to
delivery.
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for
To begin
with, clays are collected with excavators, followed by them placed on a metal grid Linking Words
then
fall into a roller. Linking Words
Then
, it is mixed with sand and water and continued by the moulding processes. The process of moulding Linking Words
could
be done in two different ways, the first one is when the wet Wrong verb form
can
bricks
are Use synonyms
cutted
with a wire cutter. Alternatively, the mixtures could be placed on a rectangle mould.
Correct your spelling
cut
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
bricks
are placed in a drying oven for 25 to 48 hours. The temperatures start from a moderate amount of 200 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
degree
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degrees
celcius
to 980 Change the capitalization
Celcius
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degree
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degrees
celsius
, Capitalize word
Celsius
then
it is increase to 870 Linking Words
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degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celcius
to 1300 Change the capitalization
Celcius
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degree
Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
celsius
. Capitalize word
Celsius
Next,
the Linking Words
bricks
are placed inside a cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
bricks
are done and ready for packaging, Use synonyms
and
followed Correct word choice
apply
with
a delivery afterwards.Change preposition
by
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