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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the changes to an
island
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, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities with the introduction of tourism.
Overall
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, an
island
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 has significant changes. Before, it was a deserted
island
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 and nobody came on. But after,
this
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island
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 is a tourist attraction and has many people travel
come
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here. In the initial
map
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Reception
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, Restaurant, Accommodation,
Pier
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 and Swimming were not located.
Whereas
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 in the final
map
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,
Reception
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 has been moved to the main centre. The number of
Accommodation
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 has a significant increase between the two maps. The left side and right side of
Reception
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 have 6 houses, 9 houses respectively. Which are connected to each other by "courtyard" footpaths. The Restaurant is near the coast and linked to the
Reception
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 and
then
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 to the
Pier
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 by vehicle track. There has been additional
Pier
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 construction on the outside of the
island
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 from the final
map
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. The
Pier
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 has a "T shape", between two sailboats and
connected
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 to the
island
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 by a vehicle track. To the west of the
island
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, the Swimming area has to be added next to the Beach.
That is
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 a difference compared to the old
map
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.
Although
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 coconut trees are still in two maps
but
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there have been a bit changed positions. The quantity of coconut trees has
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slightly increased by 1 tree in comparison with
first
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, map, reception, pier with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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