The graph below shows the percentage of UK homes using different modern technologies from 1996 to 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides data about how the percentage of UK homes using modern technology has changed over time.
Overall
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rates
increased consistently except for the figures Use synonyms
of
the mobile phone which Change preposition
for
has
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had
small
fluctuation over the period. There are two types of upward trends in the graph: stable and erratic increases. As regards the Correct article usage
a small
first,
in 1996 the Linking Words
rates
of the Use synonyms
Cd
player were around 60% and it reached a peak of approximately 83% with a slight increase from 1996 to 2003, so it was Correct your spelling
CD
the
clearly the most popular home technology. Correct article usage
apply
Likewise
, the Linking Words
rates
of home computers experienced the same trend, but the Use synonyms
rates
were roughly 30% in 1996/97. There was a gradual increase, rising from around 30% to approximately 57% Use synonyms
In contrast
, the rate of mobile phones rose erratically over the period. The figure increased slightly to under 40 % in 1999 followed by a remaining constant Linking Words
the
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at the
last
rate. Linking Words
Rates
for mobile phones overtook the home computer after 1999 and became the second most popular device. In 2003 the usage of mobile phones reached a peak of approximately 70%. The usage of internet access Use synonyms
begun
in 1998/99 with approximately 10% which was the lowest rate. There was a remarkable increase to roughly 35% until 2001 followed by a gradual climb to around 45%Wrong verb form
began
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