The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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This
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line graph shows the
population
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of UK people who have followed a vegetarian
diet
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from 1960
till
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to
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2020 years. The
percentage
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of these teenagers in the UK peaked in 1980 and
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slowly began to decline. In 2010 growth slowly picked up until 2020. In the line
graph
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graph,
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almost 10
percent
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per cent
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of these people had some vegetarian
diet
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in 1960,
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it steadily increased till the end of
1980
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the 1980
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year, which is the peak of
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vegetarian
diet
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. In 1997 it was around 3,5-4% of those people, and the vegetarian
population
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gradually decreased almost to the bottom.
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,
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lasted only until 2000,
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when
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the vegetarian people’s
population
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began to rise. In 2000
this
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population
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grew, and in 2010 the
percentage
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of vegetarian teenagers was higher than 10%. Moving on to 2020, the
percentage
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of these vegetarian adolescents remained almost the same, but still not stable in
this
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line graph. The
percentage
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of UK adolescents following a vegetarian
diet
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in 2020 was around 13%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, diet, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slowly" was used 2 times.
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