The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Introducing the maps, they illustrate the layout of Ryemouth village in 1995 and how it has transformed to its present state.

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essay will compare the architectural designs of the two maps.

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, the village site has undergone a dramatic overhaul, with several additions and relocations,

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certain areas,

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as the café and hotel, have remained unchanged. Focusing on the significant changes, the forest park was removed to accommodate the new tennis court, and the fishing port was entirely removed. A small car park was added,

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key facilities that connect the houses.

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, the shop and farm were renamed as a restaurant and a golf club.

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, the fish shop was converted into apartments.

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, certain elements remained untouched. The hotel and café stayed in their original positions, and the sea level

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remained undisturbed, preserving some green space over the course of 30 years.

ken.aizhanTue Jan 14 2025

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

149 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

development
infrastructure
land use
residential expansion
modernization effort
commercial
urban development
preserved
recreational areas
transportation infrastructure
eco-friendly
renovation
transformation
bike paths
car park
establishment

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The map displays the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agee or disagree?

Some people dislike changes in their society and in their own lives, and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive?

In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations

Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.