The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart displays the proportions of Australian exports with Japan, the USA, China and India in the years 1990 to 2012.
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Australian's
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export
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exports
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to Japan and the US decreased over the period of time
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its
export
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to China and India increased over
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time. The Australian exportation to Japan began the period at just above the quarter and decreased sharply to nearly 17% in 2000.
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, it remained relatively stable at nearly 17% until 2005 when it gradually went down
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approximately 15% in 2012. The US started the time at nearly 11% and it fluctuated between 11% and nearly 8% in 2000 when it dropped significantly to nearly 7% in 2012. China's
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from Australia began at a tiny fraction and grew gradually
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until it reached 10% in 2005 before its sharp increase to nearly 28% in 2012. the export to India began at nearly 4% in 1990 and it rose slightly to just 5% in 2012.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentages
  • exports
  • trend
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • stable
  • economic ties
  • demand
  • decline
  • recovery
  • policy changes
  • trade relationship
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • temporary surge
  • specific events
  • incentives
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