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the chart below gives information on the location and typle of dances class young people in a town in australia are currently attending. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

the chart below gives information on the location and typle of dances class young people in a town in australia are currently attending. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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Data that was given shows us the statistics of the location and variety of
dance
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 classes young
people
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 in a town in Australia are currently attending. There are 4 locations that are shown by the data, private
studios
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 , school halls, college-based
studios
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 and
last
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 but not least community halls from all of the places private
studios
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 have the most participants for the dancing class
while
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 college-based have the least amount of dancing classes. Other than that, the graph
also
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 gives us the types of dances, which are ballet , tap and modern. members under the
age
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 of 11 are mostly interested in ballet dancing
where
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which
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it
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apply
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reaches 600
people
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.
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 that
people
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with
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between
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 the
age
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 of 11-16 attend modern
dance
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, with 500
people
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 joining that type of
dance
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. But tap
dance
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 has the most stable members, the
amount
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number
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 of
people
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at
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apply
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the
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apply
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age
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aged
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 under 11 and 11 to 16
dont
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don't
 have too much of a gap. We can say that Ballet has the most
people
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 under the
age
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under
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of
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 11 and
for
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apply
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modern
dance
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 it has the most
people
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 in the
age
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 range of 11-16. and for the places, private
studios
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 have the biggest percentage,
while
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 college-based
studios
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 have the smallest percentage
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, people, studios, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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