The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show the changes in the town of Langley between 1910 and 1950.
Overall
, there were extremely big changes during different periods.
As you can see, in 1910, there was a Railway line for trains in the south of Linking Words
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town, and near it, there was Wasteland which included many Railway workers' cottages. On the opposite side, Wasteland appeared again but with a Factory in the southern region. Next of them, more facilities were available; Linking Words
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as a Laundry, Cafe, and Store. Linking Words
In addition
, Sherman Street appeared in the middle of the maps. Linking Words
Lastly
, the quite high standard of living presented in the western region of Langley, there were many Townhouses divided by Jordan Street.Linking Words
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