The line chart displays the cities population proportion in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020, along with the projections for 2030 and 2040.

The line chart displays the cities population proportion in Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia between 1970 and 2020, along with the projections for 2030 and 2040.
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The charts present the percentage of people
population
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in several countries
such
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as the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020, and how it prediction in 2030 and 2040.
Overall
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, the
population
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of all the countries are increasing through the period even how it predicted in 2030 and 2040. But, not like the other countries, in 1970, the Philippines was the country that had a high
population
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until the end of the period, it was in third place.
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, the Philippines had a 30% total
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in 1970, and getting increased by 50% in 1990.
then
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it slightly decreased to around 45% in 2010 and got up again at below 60% in 2040. Following, Malaysia had a massive
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increase throughout the period, just from 30% in 1970 to above 80% in 2040.
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, in 1970, Thailand and Indonesia had 20% and 10% community, respectively, and
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, continuously increased in 2040, to around 50% and upper 50%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • population proportion
  • line chart
  • historical trends
  • projections
  • urbanization
  • economic impact
  • infrastructure
  • social services
  • compare and contrast
  • general trends
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