The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.

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particular information about three various fields of crime were happened in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012.

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, the chart shows us that the general trend is decreasing for

burglary

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, but it is stable for car

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and robbery. The indicators of

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3500 in 2003, but it had been decreasing since 2004 and

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went down to 2500.

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, the numbers of car

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theft

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and

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at all. First of all, in 2003, the

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was most

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in Newport city. The next year it reached its peak and it

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around 3800. Since

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not increased till 2012.

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, the happened

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hit a low of 1200 in 2008, the lowest in these nine years. In comparison with

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, In 2003, the

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from individuals was least

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part in the city and it was around 600. These numbers did not change through the years.

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was begun

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2600

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it ended with 2400 people.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words burglary, theft with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

177 words

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