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The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given map compares the key development of the Bunborough region between now and
future
Correct article usage
the future
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 in 2024.
Overall
Linking Words
, several
accommodation
Change to a plural noun
accommodations
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 are going to
be build
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be built
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 in the village
for
Change preposition
to
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 leverage the tourism sectors.
To begin
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 with, the rail train will
be build
Change the verb form
be built
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 from
top
Correct article usage
the top
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 west
areas
Use synonyms
 to
south
Correct article usage
the south
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areas
Use synonyms
 and the station will be the
the
Remove the redundancy
apply
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main streets of regions.
However
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,
Linking Words
this
Correct determiner usage
these
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 changes will lead to
Correct article usage
the reconstrucing
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reconstrucing
Correct your spelling
reconstructing
constructing
two
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of two
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 homes that will become rail
station
Fix the agreement mistake
stations
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 and
divided
Wrong verb form
divide
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 the community of the
areas
Use synonyms
. On top of that, two
hotel
Change to a plural noun
hotels
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 are going to
build
Wrong verb form
be built
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 in
this
Linking Words
regions
Fix the agreement mistake
region
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 to attract visitors come to
this
Linking Words
 region. The first hotel view will
promenade
Add a missing verb
be promenade
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areas
Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
Correct article usage
the other
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other hotel
Change the wording
another hotel
other hotels
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 will have
beach
Add an article
a beach
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view
Fix the agreement mistake
views
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. It is worthwhile to note that,
promenade
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the promenade
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 was
modifying
Wrong verb form
modified
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 from
fishing
Add an article
the fishing
a fishing
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 port
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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representing
Change the form of the verb
represented
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 by three vertical rectangles.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, the street
are
Change the verb form
is
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 going to expand to the
south
Replace the word
southern
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areas
Use synonyms
 which
create
Correct subject-verb agreement
creates
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 short-cuts routes from Lynwich to these
areas
Use synonyms
.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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