The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Minh Bui
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The given pie charts describe the changes in different kinds of
energy
production in France from 1995 to 2005
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Overall
, the French preferred producing coal rather than producing the other which didn't include gas, petrol and nuclear Linking Words
energy
in 10 years
Looking at the pie charts from a more detailed perspective. First of all, in 1995 the percentage of coal production was approximately 29.8%, which was 1.13% lower in 2005 and ranked first in all 10 years. Use synonyms
Secondly
, the percentages of gas and petrol making were quite similar at approximately 29,27% and 29,63% respectively in 1995. But in 2005, the former was slightly higher, at 30.31% Linking Words
while
the latter just occupied 19,55%, which was roughly 10% lower than before. Linking Words
Thirdly
, in 1995, the figure for nuclear Linking Words
energy
making was 6,4% and slightly higher 10 years later, at 10.1%. Use synonyms
Last
but not least, the other Linking Words
energy
production wasn't paid attention to by the French, the rates of that were 4,9% and 9,10% in 1995 and 2005 respectively ,which occupied the smallest fraction in both pie charts.Use synonyms
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