The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Minh Bui

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.Write a report for a university lecturer reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Minh Bui
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The given pie charts describe the changes in different kinds of
energy
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production in France from 1995 to 2005
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, the French preferred producing coal rather than producing the other which didn't include gas, petrol and nuclear
energy
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in 10 years Looking at the pie charts from a more detailed perspective. First of all, in 1995 the percentage of coal production was approximately 29.8%, which was 1.13% lower in 2005 and ranked first in all 10 years.
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, the percentages of gas and petrol making were quite similar at approximately 29,27% and 29,63% respectively in 1995. But in 2005, the former was slightly higher, at 30.31%
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the latter just occupied 19,55%, which was roughly 10% lower than before.
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, in 1995, the figure for nuclear
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making was 6,4% and slightly higher 10 years later, at 10.1%.
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but not least, the other
energy
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production wasn't paid attention to by the French, the rates of that were 4,9% and 9,10% in 1995 and 2005 respectively ,which occupied the smallest fraction in both pie charts.
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