the chart below shows the GDP growth per year for 3 countries japan, Tunisia and Ecuador between 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the GDP growth per year for 3 countries japan, Tunisia and Ecuador between 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart demonstrates the annual
GDP
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development per year for 3 countries namely
Japan
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, Tunisia and
Ecuador
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from 2007 to 2010.
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, there was a similar decrease trend in both countries Tunisia and
Ecuador
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,
while
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Japan
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witnessed a contrasting movement in the annual
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advance in
4-year
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a 4-year
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period.
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,
Ecuador
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took the lowest position in terms of
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growth from
Japan
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. Looking at the chart from a more detailed perspective, first and foremost, from 2007 to 2009, the proportion of GPD increase in Tunisia ranked
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first but
then
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decreased by 3.0% and experienced a period of stability at 3.0% in the
last
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year. Moving on to
Japan
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, the rate of
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growth increased dramatically over 4 years from 2.0% to nearly 7.0%.
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but not least, in the first 2 years of the cycle,
Ecuador
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levelled out at 3.0% and went down gradually to below 2.0% in the
last
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2 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, japan, ecuador with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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