The table below gives an information about UK independent films. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table provides details about

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topics

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of a film that

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in the UK and Ireland since 2012. The picture is divided into 4 categories and there are 10 genres in total. First of all, there are only two types of film that

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benefit

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20. Comedy is the biggest source of income in there, which is just over 45.4 %.

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horror

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film is the

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with just above 20.2 %. And the others

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smaller because a value is under 10.

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, comedy is lower than drama and

documentary

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documentaries

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regarding

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a number

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of releases. Drama and documentary

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the highest, with 35 respectively.

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condition is

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with

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the percentage

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of all releases.

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, the smallest number is Biopic at 1 and 0.7% . All in all, drama and

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is the king based on releases, but the genre that gives

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impact for profit is Comedy.

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, romance is the

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position on the table.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

158 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

independent films
box office earnings
genre
budget
dramatic increase
niche market
experimental cinema
diversification
profitability
audience interest
investment in film industry
low-budget films
high-budget films
release trends
performance metrics

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