The table below gives an information about UK independent films. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives an information about UK independent films. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides details about
list
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a list
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topics
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of a film that
showed
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has been shown
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in the UK and Ireland since 2012. The picture is divided into 4 categories and there are 10 genres in total. First of all, there are only two types of film that
get
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benefit
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the upper
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20. Comedy is the biggest source of income in there, which is just over 45.4 %.
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horror
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the horror
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film is the
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with just above 20.2 %. And the others
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smaller because a value is under 10.
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, comedy is lower than drama and
documentary
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documentaries
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regarding
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a number
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of releases. Drama and documentary
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the highest, with 35 respectively.
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condition is
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with
percentage
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the percentage
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of all releases.
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, the smallest number is Biopic at 1 and 0.7% . All in all, drama and
documentary
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documentaries
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is the king based on releases, but the genre that gives
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the best
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impact for profit is Comedy.
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, romance is the
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position on the table.
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