The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two different diagrams provide information about the comparison between the quantities of people who visit Ashdown Museum and the results of surveys of the visitors' satisfaction during the year before and after building development.
Overall
, there is an improvement in the number of visitors and their pleasure in the Museum.
Looking first at the table, the total of citizens who come to the place during Linking Words
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year before the renovation is 74.000. Correct article usage
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However
, the count experienced upward of 92.000 after the restructuring of the property. The cost used in building repairs can have a positive impact, namely, an increase in the revenue sector.
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Secondly
, from the details given by the pie chart, there is a large change in the fulfilment of the guests before and after refurbishment. The count of review outcome data of participants' contentment before the restoration period is only under 50%. Linking Words
On the other hand
, after the restoration, the counts increase to 75%.Linking Words
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