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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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response
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 an international travel magazine
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 has posted
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 article
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 the front page about my hometown which is not correct.
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 magazine, which
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 released on 14th January carried
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 wrong
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 that the only public school in my area is going to be closed next month, and
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information
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 has created a stressful environment among all those parents who send their children to
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 education centre. Not only
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 already started looking for a public institute in a different city closer to my hometown. I think it is very crucial to repost the correct
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 to reduce the stress
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 parents who
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due to
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 incorrect news.
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, if
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 is being corrected on
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 parents will stop admitting their children to another school which will save their both
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 money and precious time. I think reporters should take quick action against
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 news so that it will stop spreading among all the citizens of my town.
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 apology letter from an international travel magazine so that they will not repeat their mistake again in the future, and research twice before posting any news. I look forward to your quick response. Thank you. Yours Sincerely, Amanjot Kaur.
Submitted by amanjotkaur0303 on

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task achievement
Include specific examples and suggestions to enhance the strength of your argument.
coherence cohesion
Further develop the organization of individual ideas within paragraphs.
task achievement
The letter addresses all the points mentioned in the task, providing a clear response.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are conducted appropriately, maintaining the standard formal structure for a letter.
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