There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
It is said that
,
removing non-academic from the school syllabus is essential to Remove the comma
apply
enhances
pupil focus on Change the verb
enhance
academic
curriculum. Add an article
the academic
This
essay strongly disagrees with the above statement mentioned, for two main reasons. Linking Words
Firstly
, Linking Words
introduced
Wrong verb form
introducing
intertimant
subjects to Correct your spelling
interment
internment
curriculum
Correct article usage
the curriculum
such
as Linking Words
cook
or Wrong verb form
cooking
exercise
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exercises
it’s
assessing them to reduce Verb problem
,
stress
of study. Add an article
the stress
Secondly
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discovered
the passions or Wrong verb form
discover
skills
the children have.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, Linking Words
supporting
adding unacademic materials like, cook, texture and Verb problem
apply
play
football to Wrong verb form
playing
schools
approaches Fix the agreement mistake
school
it
relieves the Correct pronoun usage
apply
exhausting
faced Replace the word
exhaustion
the
learner during learn process. To illustrate, when they Change preposition
by the
doing
something as Wrong verb form
do
group
and do not require more concern it takes them out of excessive thinking Add an article
a group
due to
, they Linking Words
spent
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spend
this
time Linking Words
in
hand or foot Change preposition
on
skills
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it fosters Linking Words
social
attitude becauseCorrect article usage
a social
,
they work as teamwork. The research conducted by Cambridge Remove the comma
apply
university
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University
,
can be a prime example, they compared Remove the comma
apply
results
of students between two schools. One without Correct article usage
the results
intertainment
programs and Correct your spelling
entertainment
other
with Correct article usage
the other
skills
programs the finding was. Students get a higher degree Use synonyms
they
Correct word choice
if they
registration
in Replace the word
register
the
second school.
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a
Additionally
, encouraging introduced non-academic Linking Words
activity
may discovering Fix the agreement mistake
activities
on
the talent or hobby the pupil Change preposition
apply
have
. In Change the verb form
has
the
other words, Correct article usage
apply
practice
more Wrong verb form
practising
activity
Fix the agreement mistake
activities is
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this
significant route to know their passion and develop Correct determiner usage
a
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this
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these
skills
. Player Majed Alharbi in Saudi, Use synonyms
for instance
, he famous player and he was Linking Words
achievement
to a lot of Add an article
an achievement
victory
during his Change to a plural noun
victories
live
he was begging from schools.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that introducing skill subjects Replace the word
life
are
crucial for Correct subject-verb agreement
is
improve
Change the verb form
improving
students
Change noun form
students'
student's
psychology
state and Replace the word
psychological
discovered
their Wrong verb form
discovering
skills
.Use synonyms
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