The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian

exports

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with four different nations from 1990 to 2012.

Overall

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china

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China

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shows

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has shown

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the most significant

rose

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rise

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over 22 years. Followed by

Japan

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and

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the united

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united states

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United States

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who

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apply

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seems

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seem

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gradually

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to gradually

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fell

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fall

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between those years.

Regarding the

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The

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first two countries

who

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that

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exhibits

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exhibit

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an increase

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increase

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increasing

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trend

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trends

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which

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apply

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are

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India and China.

Frist

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First

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, India looks gradually

increase

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increased

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around

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to around

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7% from 1990 - 2005, started to increase rapidly from 10% to 25%

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2010, and

finally

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reach

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reached

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almost 30% in 2012. Marks the highest proportion of Australian

exports

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compare

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compared

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other

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the other

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three countries in that year.

Furthermore

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, India

start

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started

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with

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the same level

with

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China in 1990.

However

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, the

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exports

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export

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percentages

remain

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remained

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steady for 10 years since 1990 and just started to

increased

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increase

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moderately between 2000 to 2010

for

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around 5%,

while

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it dropped again in 2012.

In contrast

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, the composition of

exports

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Japan

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and

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the US

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show a gradual decline from 1990 to 2012.

Japan

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started with the highest rate in 1990 with

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exports'

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exports

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proportion around 25%.

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However

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However,

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they declined moderately to 15% in 2012.

On the other hand

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United

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the United

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States has a common trend with

Japan

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. They

seems

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seem

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gradually decrease

since

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from

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2000 to 2010, from 10% to 5%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, japan with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
37
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

201 words

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