The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The diagram below describes the relationship between
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males
female
in a 4-years Fix the agreement mistake
females
age
difference in different countries during 3 Use synonyms
dacedes
.
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decades
overall
, it shows that working Linking Words
men
rates had decreased over the years in the selected countries. Use synonyms
Whereas
the working Linking Words
women
rates Use synonyms
is
less fluctuating Change the verb form
are
through out
the years.
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throughout
australia
, elder working Change the capitalization
Australia
men
between the Use synonyms
age
of 60 to 64 had massively decreased from 74% to 47%. Where Use synonyms
woman
in the same country and Fix the agreement mistake
women
age
group had increased by 1% from 18% to 19%. the same goes for Use synonyms
belgium
where the mentioned Change the capitalization
Belgium
age
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men
group massively decreased by more than Use synonyms
the
third. Correct article usage
a
Whereas
for Linking Words
women
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is
decreased by 1%.
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it
men
in Use synonyms
japan
, 76% were working in the year 2000 Capitalize word
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comparing
to 84% in the year 1970. Wrong verb form
compared
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women
percentage remained the Change noun form
women's
almsot
the same change from 40% to 43% respectively. In the USA, employment has Correct your spelling
almost
slighty
decreased from 73% in 1970 to 55% in 2000, where is has a slight increase in Correct your spelling
slightly
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women
numbers as it was 36% over 38% Change noun form
women's
respectivley
.Correct your spelling
respectively
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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