The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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, there are six main steps, starting with the uranium ore mining and ending with the spent
fuel
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storage.
However
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, the spent
fuel
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could be reused in the one of stages
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of being disposed of.
To begin
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with, the raw material is extracted from the underground uranium mines and sent to plants for
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processing. In the next stage, the ore is enriched and converted into U-235
fuel
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pallets, which are used as part of generators at the power stations to produce electricity in the third step. As soon as the
fuel
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becomes spent, after four years on average, it is removed from generators in step four. Afterwards, some of it could be reused to make more electricity. The process ends when, those pallets that cannot be reprocessed, are transported into special storages and buried there in the containers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive material
  • Reactor core
  • Control rods
  • Coolant
  • Thermal energy
  • Steam generator
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Spent fuel
  • Radioactive waste
  • Depleted uranium
  • Decommissioning
  • Sustainable energy
  • Nuclear proliferation
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