The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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graph illustrates the proportion of individuals living in the city side, in four different Asian countries every ten years in 6 periods

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from 1970 and the estimated amount in 2030, 2040.

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Malasia

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has the highest portions over the others almost

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all the time.

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Indonesia

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from the bottom and managed to exceed Thailand and

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Philippines

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the Philippines

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between 2010-2020.

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Philippines

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had the highest number of people living in cities more than 30%.

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Malaysia came second with 30%

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it started to increase gradually outraging

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Philippines

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in the next period before

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the top after a

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growth between 1980-1990. But it started to fluctuate for the remaining period.

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Malaysia rocketed after 1990 reaching the top and

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in the next years. Indonesia started with the lower portion about 14%,

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the next years it rose steeply exceeding Thailand and

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Philippines

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in 2010 and 2020 respectively. Thailand went up moderately in 1970 with 18% reaching 28% in 1990. Before it

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steady until 2020

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it is expected to grow in the future as the

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three countries.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

graph
percentage
population
cities
Asian countries
1970
2020
predictions
2030
2040
estimations
urban
increasing
steadily
Japan
China
rise
urbanization
South Korea
India
upward trend
slow pace
surpass
resided
projected
moderate increase
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