In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

Smoking in public has recently become an act of violation in several nations and a number of people think that it is a good idea to ban it.

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essay agrees with

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idea because it

prevent

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us from deadly substances in cigarettes and

improve

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air

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quality environmentally and socially in the community.

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with, it is widely known that smoking

posing

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threat

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a threat

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to our

body

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bodies

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especially our

lung

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lungs

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in

a

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long run.

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is because the substances inside cigarettes

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as tar and

nicotin

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nicotine

are notoriously harmful. The more we

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to these lethal compounds, the greater

it

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they

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accumulates

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and slowly

deteriorates

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lung function resulting in many diseases

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as allergies, COPD or lung cancer.

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, a report from WHO shows that

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of people with breathing

problem

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problems

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, namely COPD,

often

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excessively surrounded

with

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by

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cigarettes

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cigarette

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smoke in their

life

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lives

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. Another reason why smoking should be banned in

the

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apply

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shared communities

because

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it

worsen

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the

air

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quality and

create

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smell disturbances. Clearly, it pollutes the environment with its by-products which are ashes and

smokes

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that disperse into the

air

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. Socially, getting disturbed by smelly burning

fume

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fumes

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can

spoiled

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the vibe of

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the surrounding

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surrounding

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.

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, China

are

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one of the

top rank

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countries with the most polluted

air

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index in the world which major factor that

contribute

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to

create

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creating

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danger

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dangerous

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micro

dusts

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dust

specks of dust

clouds of dust

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are surprisingly from smoking

ciggarettes

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cigarettes

.

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, smoking

cigarrettes

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cigarettes

publicly can bring about several airway-related

sickness

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as well as

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create

air

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pollution and I,

therefore

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, believe that it is the right action to ban smoking in public.