The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
#information #uk #acid #rain #emissions #millions #tonnes #four #sectors #report #university #lecturer #comparisons
A glance at the graph provided reveals the number of UK acid rain emissions throughout the years for every two years from 1991 to 2007.
Overall
, it seems that every contributor is lower than 3.5 Linking Words
million
with the lowest number Use synonyms
from
households.
First of all, it is evident from the information that the figure volunteered by electricity, gas and water supply tends to keep decreasing from 3.5 Change preposition
of
million
in 1991 to less than 1 Use synonyms
million
in 2007. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the same trend has been happening with other industries and domestically where the graph shows an impulse to decline throughout 16 years of observations.
In stark contrast, Linking Words
however
, compared to the initial portion, the final total of transportation and communication contribution to emission is higher with almost one Linking Words
million
. Use synonyms
In addition
, we believe that we need to highlight an event where the statistics are equal for electricity and transport in 2003.Linking Words
Submitted by alifahrc on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼