The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The line chart
present
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presents
U.S.
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the U.S.
consumptions
of energy by fuel since 1980 with Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
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a prediction
the prediction
prediction
for the next years .The six sources of energy were (Fix the agreement mistake
predictions
petrol
and Use synonyms
oil
,coal,natural Use synonyms
gas
,nuclear,solar and hydropower.
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Overall
,Linking Words
petrol
and Use synonyms
oil
were and remain on the top with the most Use synonyms
consuptional
source of energy in America .Correct your spelling
consumption
Although
coal and natural Linking Words
gas
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were fluctuate
during Wrong verb form
fluctuated
years
at the second position, the other three sources were the leastCorrect article usage
the years
favorable
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favourable
one
to use.
During Correct pronoun usage
ones
history
period (1980-2008) ,Replace the word
the historical
petrol
and Use synonyms
oil
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was
the most Correct subject-verb agreement
were
material
used by Fix the agreement mistake
materials
citizen
with close to 40 quadrillion units.Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
while
natural Linking Words
gas
came Use synonyms
at
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in
the
second place with Correct article usage
apply
closly
20 units,coal Correct your spelling
close to
take
third place with almost 19 Wrong verb form
took
unit
.
On the projection time (2008-2030),Fix the agreement mistake
units
petrol
and Use synonyms
oil
preserve Use synonyms
it
position with a significant increase Change the pronoun
its
predict
by 2030.Wrong verb form
predicted
coal
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Coal
consuming
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consumption
also
will Linking Words
increse
to overtake natural Correct your spelling
increase
gas
until Use synonyms
reach
the peak of 30 units with Change the verb form
reaching
Correct article usage
the expection
expection
of natural Correct your spelling
expectation
exception
gas
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consuption
to remain steady in the next few years.
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consumption
However
, nuclear,Linking Words
soarl
,wind and hydropower Correct your spelling
solar
ranging
throughout the past Replace the word
range
then
keep constant use in future with 5,4,3 unite for nuclear,solar and wind ,Linking Words
hydropowe
(respectivly).Correct your spelling
hydropower
hydro power
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petrol, oil, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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