The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides key background about residents of New Zealand in two years respectively by age group. The units are measured in percentage .
the ages above 65 increased by 4 %,
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, it is clear from the graph that the group of 40-64 has the most increased percentage.Linking Words
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, the years from 15-39 were the major values in 2011, Linking Words
whereas
the group above 65 years had the lowest values in the table.
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what is shown, the categories of 40 to 64 have increased by about 8000 persons in 2012 . Linking Words
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it has had a major increase between the others .
In terms of the other categories, from 15-39 slightly decreased by about 3000 people, Linking Words
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, ages under fifteen have Linking Words
also
declined by approximately 2000 body.
In sum , all aeons have increased by +0.6 % , about 30,000 individualsLinking Words
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