The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram clearly illustrates how the

process

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of recycling

glass

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accur

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occur

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,the

process

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pass

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passes

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through 6

diffrent

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different

steps starting with human

throw

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throwing

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their rubbish until

the

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apply

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delivery after

moudling

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moving it

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to the market for reuse by the consumer. At the onset ,the

glass

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wast

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was

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throw

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thrown

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in the recycle bin by

human

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humans

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then

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transformed

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was transformed

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by the cleaners with

a special cars

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a special car

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treatment

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the treatment

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plant (where the

wast

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waste

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collected

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was collected

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, sorted, processed and transformed

intoreusable

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into reusable

material) .The

glass

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placed

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was placed

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in a washing and

sterillising

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sterilising

sterilizing

machine to clean it from any dirt.

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, the

glass

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wast

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waste

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enter

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enters

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crushing

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the crushing

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and melting machine to

crushing

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crush

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it into

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apply

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small pieces and

melting

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melt

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it to create new

glass

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product

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products

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. The

last

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part of the

process

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is moulding the

glass

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produced after the melting

process

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and

mould

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moulding

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it in

diffrent

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different

shapes

depend

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depending

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on the needs , after that refill it .

Evently

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Eventually

, the

glass

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bottles

jar

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jars

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and other

variation

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variations

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send

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are sent

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to the supermarket for consumption.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, glass with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
31
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

156 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

diagram
recycled
stages
collection
waste glass
sources
bottles
jars
windows
transported
recycling facility
sorted
color
processes
cleaned
impurities
labels
caps
crushed
cullet
raw material
melted
furnace
temperature
molded
new glass products
distribution
consumers

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The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animal and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Some people argue that school is no longer necessary because children can obtain all of the information they need from the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?