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The given line graph illustrates the figure for carbon dioxide emitted by each person in four countries in Europe over a span of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.

The given line graph illustrates the figure for carbon dioxide emitted by each person in four countries in Europe over a span of 40 years, from 1967 to 2007.
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The graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide (CO2)
emissions
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 per person in four countries—United
Kingdom
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,
Sweden
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, Italy, and Portugal—between 1967 and 2007, measured in metric
tonnes
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.
Overall
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,
while
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emissions
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 in the United
Kingdom
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 and
Sweden
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 experienced significant reductions, Italy and Portugal displayed consistent and notable growth. The United
Kingdom
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 remained the largest emitter throughout,
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 Portugal saw the most dramatic surge, starting at the lowest levels. In greater detail, the United
Kingdom
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's
emissions
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 declined steadily from around 11 metric
tonnes
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 in 1967 to 9
tonnes
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 by 2007, maintaining its lead over other nations.
Sweden
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 followed a different pattern, peaking at 10
tonnes
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 in 1977 before plummeting to 5
tonnes
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 by the final year.
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, Italy’s
emissions
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 rose gradually, climbing from 4
tonnes
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 to nearly 8
tonnes
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. Portugal experienced a sharp escalation, rising from just over 1 tonne to almost 6
tonnes
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, surpassing
Sweden
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 by the end of the period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, kingdom, sweden, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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