The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The percentage of New
Zealand
population is shown in Change noun form
Zealand's
this
line graph in the time frame of 1950 to 2050. Linking Words
This
graph is divided into 4 main ages, those being 0-14, 25-37, 38-48 and over 65
It is noted that the most crucial changes for all of these groups of age happened in 1990. Linking Words
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-14 category is the only one Correct article usage
The 0
who
, in comparison to the other groups, has shown a slight rise in their journey. Correct pronoun usage
that
In contrast
, the other remaining communities have seen slight fluctuations.
38-45 reached a sharp growth of just below 50% in 1990, and it is believed it will fall to around 40% in 2050. Linking Words
While
the over 65 community had a relatively steady percentage until Linking Words
the
1990, extending nearly 70%, it is just the same year it is predicted to see a Change the article
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fall out
and to end up in Join the words
fallout
the
about 50% in 2050.
Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, the 0-14 group of age starts with about 5%, and Linking Words
while
it has a slight drop until the very same year as those two mentioned above, it shows a slighter rise beginning from 1990 and it is believed to reach up to 20% by 2050. Linking Words
In addition
, the line presenting Linking Words
the
25-37 shows a slight jump in the period of 1950-1960, followed by a faint drop in Correct article usage
apply
the
1990, and Change the article
apply
then
ending up to almost 0% in 2050, showcasing a massive drop Linking Words
of
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population
for Add an article
the population
this
specific classification.Linking Words
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