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The graph shows in percentage terms of pattern terms the changing of domestic access to modern technology in homes in Uk

The graph shows in percentage terms of pattern terms the changing of domestic access to modern technology in homes in Uk
#percentage #terms #pattern #access #technology #homes #uk
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Given line
graph
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 illustrates the proportion of changing
trend
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of
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in
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 local access to modern
technology
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 in living areas in the United Kingdom. As can be seen from the
graph
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,
pattern
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the pattern
a pattern
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 for all modern
technology
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equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
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 was upward during given time from 1996 to 2003. Beginning of the timeline,
CD
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the CD
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 player was the most popular
technology
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 in
the
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apply
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UK homes and it
maintain
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maintained
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 its popularity till
end
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the end
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 of the
graph
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. Beginning at
the
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60% CD
player
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players
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 showed about 20% growth during
this
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 period.
Second
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 most popular
technology
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 was home computers which started at about 30% and it reached well below
a
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60%. In 1996, the least popular mobile phone depicted a rocket-like growth from just under 20% to roughly 70%.
Although
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 Internet access
did
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 not
invent
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invented
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 in the 1996-97 period,
after
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this
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 invention people showed huge interest
to
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in
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this
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technology
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 and it reached at well considerably more than 40%
in
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at
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 the end of the
graph
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, technology with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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